The magic recodes pacing up again...

Offer up praise and thanks to players and wizards alike. Nothing like feel good moments to spruce up morale
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Hektor
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The magic recodes pacing up again...

Post by Hektor » 06 Mar 2013 10:39

Thanks to all the wizards involved in making the magic guild recodes a possibility and now also a realization.

The goals for 2013 are very ambitious and I hope you will be able to succeed.

I am sure that I am not the only player ready to lend a hand in whatever way we can.
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Re: The magic recodes pacing up again...

Post by Windemere » 06 Mar 2013 17:03

I'm right there with ya Hektor,

Not only is this an incredibly ambitious endeavor, the fact that everyone seems so committed is what gives me hope! I really am pleased to see that Genesis is thriving in creative potential from our Wizarding community. I think it will do a lot to draw people back, and hopefully new people in!

Agree with Hektor. Anyway I can help, I will!

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Re: The magic recodes pacing up again...

Post by Nomm » 06 Mar 2013 19:51

I can only agree. With all that is happening it feels very exciting
to be a part of Genesis at the moment.

Thank you for all effort and time you put into this recode.

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petros
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Re: The magic recodes pacing up again...

Post by petros » 06 Mar 2013 20:56

Get excited....

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As you complete your prayer to Lord Pyros, you manifest a single flame in the air stir as he grants his fiery vengeance for your use against those who would harm you. A single flame bursts into a fiery liquid ball that engulfs you momentarily before settling into a fiery shield that gently pulses along your skin without harming you.

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Re: The magic recodes pacing up again...

Post by Windemere » 06 Mar 2013 21:14

petros wrote:Get excited....

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As you complete your prayer to Lord Pyros, you manifest a single flame in the air stir as he grants his fiery vengeance for your use against those who would harm you. A single flame bursts into a fiery liquid ball that engulfs you momentarily before settling into a fiery shield that gently pulses along your skin without harming you.
That is pretty exciting. A few comments through. One, fiery is used a bit too often I feel. Second, "You manifest a single flame in the air stir" does not make sense. Might I suggest the following, along the same lines

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As you complete your prayer to Lord Pyros, you feel him grant his vengeance that you may use it against those who would harm you.  A single flame begins to stir in the air in front of you and suddenly bursts into a molten liquid ball that engulfs you completely before settling into a fiery shield.  The shield, though made of flames, pulses along your skin without harming you.
What do you think?

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petros
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Re: The magic recodes pacing up again...

Post by petros » 06 Mar 2013 22:47

Looks good, Windemere! Of course, that's what the alpha is for. To help refine some of these descriptions.

By my estimation, we're about 2 weeks away from the alpha for the EW. No promises, of course, but that's a personal goal of mine!

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Re: The magic recodes pacing up again...

Post by Windemere » 06 Mar 2013 22:52

Well,

As Alpha is specifically for Layman Worshippers I won't be able to participate in it and help provide feedback on the descriptions. Or am I incorrect? I'd love to have an opportunity to provide feedback on the descriptions.

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