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The magic recodes pacing up again...
Posted: 06 Mar 2013 10:39
by Hektor
Thanks to all the wizards involved in making the magic guild recodes a possibility and now also a realization.
The goals for 2013 are very ambitious and I hope you will be able to succeed.
I am sure that I am not the only player ready to lend a hand in whatever way we can.
Re: The magic recodes pacing up again...
Posted: 06 Mar 2013 17:03
by Windemere
I'm right there with ya Hektor,
Not only is this an incredibly ambitious endeavor, the fact that everyone seems so committed is what gives me hope! I really am pleased to see that Genesis is thriving in creative potential from our Wizarding community. I think it will do a lot to draw people back, and hopefully new people in!
Agree with Hektor. Anyway I can help, I will!
Windemere
Re: The magic recodes pacing up again...
Posted: 06 Mar 2013 19:51
by Nomm
I can only agree. With all that is happening it feels very exciting
to be a part of Genesis at the moment.
Thank you for all effort and time you put into this recode.
Re: The magic recodes pacing up again...
Posted: 06 Mar 2013 20:56
by petros
Get excited....
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As you complete your prayer to Lord Pyros, you manifest a single flame in the air stir as he grants his fiery vengeance for your use against those who would harm you. A single flame bursts into a fiery liquid ball that engulfs you momentarily before settling into a fiery shield that gently pulses along your skin without harming you.
Re: The magic recodes pacing up again...
Posted: 06 Mar 2013 21:14
by Windemere
petros wrote:Get excited....
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As you complete your prayer to Lord Pyros, you manifest a single flame in the air stir as he grants his fiery vengeance for your use against those who would harm you. A single flame bursts into a fiery liquid ball that engulfs you momentarily before settling into a fiery shield that gently pulses along your skin without harming you.
That is pretty exciting. A few comments through. One, fiery is used a bit too often I feel. Second, "You manifest a single flame in the air stir" does not make sense. Might I suggest the following, along the same lines
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As you complete your prayer to Lord Pyros, you feel him grant his vengeance that you may use it against those who would harm you. A single flame begins to stir in the air in front of you and suddenly bursts into a molten liquid ball that engulfs you completely before settling into a fiery shield. The shield, though made of flames, pulses along your skin without harming you.
What do you think?
Windemere
Re: The magic recodes pacing up again...
Posted: 06 Mar 2013 22:47
by petros
Looks good, Windemere! Of course, that's what the alpha is for. To help refine some of these descriptions.
By my estimation, we're about 2 weeks away from the alpha for the EW. No promises, of course, but that's a personal goal of mine!
Re: The magic recodes pacing up again...
Posted: 06 Mar 2013 22:52
by Windemere
Well,
As Alpha is specifically for Layman Worshippers I won't be able to participate in it and help provide feedback on the descriptions. Or am I incorrect? I'd love to have an opportunity to provide feedback on the descriptions.
Windemere